Monday, April 16, 2012

Wonder


wonder where I stand
you agreed everything
without being willing

  • Haiku Heights - Day 17 : #128 : Wonder
  • Dear friends I have been travelling a lot these days, and not able to comment much, but will make sure to catch up soon!!



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
se preguntan cuál es mi posición
todo lo que usted está de acuerdo
sin querer

In Portugese
me pergunto onde estou
você concorda tudo
sem estar disposto


7 comments:

  1. that was too much in just 3 lines...very deep and intense...great one... :)

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  2. That would make me wonder where I stood too.

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  3. That is a sad situation...I hope it will be resolved soon ~

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  4. But then that how life moves on...one can't be always willingly agree to everything.. but then to be always unwilling to agree to everything is not good.. but on occasion needs to be done...is this what we call adjustments and compromises...even Earth has compromised on Moon's absense twice a month..

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  5. This always touches me how you understand the life so well in simple examples. I loved reading the " Earth has compromised on Moon's absense twice a month.." thing!!Nice!
    But as far as my life goes and my suggestions to everyone out their is 'Adjustment' is always nice to do, it means more of adapting to aura and bringing a better change, but when it comes to 'Compromise' I shall though never do any compromise in life, for compromise brings inflexibility in mind, unhappiness and is a forceful act. One must set a mind to adjust, mould, shape up in the things rather aggressively get into something that doesn't give happiness in inner soul. I'm sure there must be certain way to make thyself comfortable even in the worst. Something like in your language.. 'there is still a Silver line to beam when there are clouds and when there are clouds there still likes a faint hope of light...'

    However, I agree with all what you have perceived... 'always unwilling to agree to everything is not good..' this push & pull of life is magnificent!!
    Thankyou for blessing this Haiku with wonderful words yours and churning my thoughts!!

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  6. Some what sad feelings this one brings up to me.

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  7. I prefer to attempt a balance of "give and take" for the highest good of all.
    Day 17 ~~ Answers

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