Saturday, June 9, 2012

Gold Dust


We are product of
passion in priorities ,

grace our, other's life!

Sacrifices made
tough choices evolved in life

Strengthens you for sure!

quite nobility
be a candle to your own

dark thoughts, make tough choice!

Cakewalk to race
In contest of life be calm,

for joy, power, Run!

Wisdom as they pose
summers, rain or autumn, cold

dare it, holding high,

tears of joy in eyes
unable to see clearly

fine things emerge!

horses kicking up
into cloud of blurry dirt,

mystic gold-dust rose!




Also read this : Some Tough Decisions

28 comments:

  1. Hiya, what an interesting presentation, with the lines alternating in size. Gives it extra impact.

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  2. smiles...i like the imagery of the horses in the end...and it kinda pulls us back from all the rest of the poem too...i like that...grace & sacrifices def play a big part as well..

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  3. Yes, every choice we make has either good or bad consequences depending on whether we've made a good or bad choice. And, hopefully we grow from whatever choices we make.
    Lovely.

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  4. Important choices and great drawing. I like the horse kicking up. k.

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  5. Wow, Rachel. Your horses are absolutely beautiful. WELCOME to Sunday Sketches. :) Love seeing your talent.

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  6. Amazing post ~ and I love your sketch ~ ~ thanks, ^_^
    (A Creative Harbor)

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  7. Love the images and emotions evoked in this lovely set....cool sketch

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  8. your horses have great presence and attitude. love them.
    gold dust.
    may all our choices and intentions in realizing them be worthy enough to kick up gold dust!

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  9. Love the poem, so strong with the horse's face.
    xo
    lynn

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  10. just loveley.great line work!

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  11. I love the sumi feel of your sketches. Blessings!

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  12. Beautiful poem and great sketches. I'm not game to try horses. Well done.
    Von

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  13. I love the sketch of the horses, always a favorite subject of mine when I was a young girl, and your poem rocks, I especially liked the " for joy, power, Run!"....very empowering! waving hi from the hills of North Carolina :)

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  14. this is fun! horses are magnificent animals and you really captured spirit and love here!

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  15. wow these are really gorgeous... you capture the movement so well...xx

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  16. smashing drawings. Happy PPF, Annette x

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  17. Beautiful poem and wonderful horses. Happy PPF!
    Rinda

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  18. I love horses! :) These look lovey. :)

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  19. Fabulous sketches, the airy brush work is beautiful.

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  20. Hi Rachel, this really made my day :D

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  21. Oh, I love your horses. I love the dark lines! Awesome job!

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  22. I agree with Vonny, I just don't do horses, I'm unsure I could capture their beauty like you do. thanks for joining APR this week!
    Best,
    Jenn

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  23. beautiful sketch and the words too.

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  24. The wisdom in your words and the punctuated larger letters comes through loud and clear. Blessings, Janet PPF

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  25. Beautiful. I love the simple yet bold lines!

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  26. Strong poem and illustration! Well done!!

    Hugs Giggles

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