Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Doubt



if all my mistakes
was to see your smile, I doubt
if it was mistake!


  • Haiku Heights - Day 4 : #116 : Doubt
  • Picture from movie 'Amelie'



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
si todos mis errores
fue a ver su sonrisa, no creo que
si fue un error!

In Portugese
se todos os meus erros
foi para ver o seu sorriso, eu duvido
se era erro!

13 comments:

  1. a wonderful haiku..
    i donno,
    i too am not sure if it can be called a mistake anymore.. unless it is from a true heart, of true love, with true intentions, it is a mistake, i feel.

    loved it.. :)

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    1. I doubt!! ehhee..
      Thankyou so much for your thoughts, truly appreciate them!

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  2. This is a very sweet haiku. So positive.

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    1. Ellecee, you are a darling absolutely... Thankyou for blessing me with your presence. Gracious Always!

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  3. Very nice twist...just a note that haiku do not end in the same rhyming words ~

    Cheers :-)

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    1. Grace, I shall definitely keep that in mind in future!! Thank you for bringing that into my notice. :))

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  4. lovely haiku ~ great meaning ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. Namaste Carol, Thank you for the visit :))

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  5. If I get it exactly what you want to say..then I would say don't stop making mistakes...keep blooming with one's smiles..Rachana.. amazing talent you!!

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  6. That was cute doubt and mistake ...Let it be like that forever :)

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