Monday, April 2, 2012

Deserted


Deserted alley
But found sound of your giggle
Delight mind deserve!





  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
Callejón desierto
Pero el sonido de su risa encontrado
Mente deleite merece!

In Portugese
Beco deserto
Som, mas encontrou do seu riso
Mente delícia merece!

8 comments:

  1. What a delightful haiku that!!!

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  2. Lovely haiku, I especially like the second line! It feels like fun.

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  3. oh i love ur haiku!! its so lively and fun:) agn, i loved it!!

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  4. A giggle in an alley that you thought was deserted...sort of a surprise, I would imagine!

    Deserted Branches

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  5. Love the positive spin on this haiku ~ ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. delightful haiku creator.. "found sound of your giggle" :-) :-) :-)

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  7. I like the giggles too ~

    Very nice haiku ~

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  8. Love this one ... deserted streets and the giggle of someone you love. Great!

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