Thursday, April 26, 2012


on my hand, brings back
temptation, heat up old flames!
slightest brush of yours

  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
Yo canto en la gracia suave
melodía en mí el tuyo
la música dentro de nosotros,

In Portugese
menor escova do seu
na minha mão, traz de volta
tentação, aquecer chamas antigos!,


  1. Romantically expressed the first encounters with a partner! Beautiful...

    Rosy lips of temptation - A Haiku

  2. Hi Rachana,
    I like the image as well as your poem.Since I read the line on your comment "constructive feedback",I would like to correct your Haiku to be 5-7-5 format.(

  3. Nice...:-) could totally relate to it...:-) some temptations never die!...

  4. Being a romantic person, I love this haiku. Thank you.

  5. lovely romantic haiku and great photo ~ feel the love ~ ^_^

  6. Picture and haiku, such a nice painting out here!

  7. This is pretty well crafted haiku..passionate.. well done..


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