Sunday, April 8, 2012

play




you like hide and seek
while play, touch and set me free
love talks in riddles


  • Haiku Heights - Day 7 : #118 : Play
  • Picture from movie 'Amelie'



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
le gusta a las escondidas
mientras que el juego, el tacto y me puso en libertad
habla de amor en las adivinanzas

In Portugese
gostaria de esconde-esconde
enquanto toque jogo, e me libertar
fala de amor em enigmas


12 comments:

  1. "love talks in riddles" nice sentence. What a wonderful verse. I have used hide and seek also in my contribution for the April Challenge of Haiku heights.
    Come and see for yourself.
    I write under the nom the plume Chevrefeuille which is French for Honeysuckle. I am writing haiku sine the late eighties.

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    1. Loved your take on the words in the Haiku!!
      Sure look forward to know more about the take behind the name you have chosen, I love Honeysuckle flowers :)
      Thank you for sharing your ideas and story with us!
      I truly appreciate that!
      Thankyou for visiting the page!

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  2. Ah, yes ~ love can talk in riddles ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  3. love talks in riddle.. that's a beautiful line..true..
    nice haiku... :)

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  4. This is very nice. Well done.

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  5. The riddles of love can be like a serious game. Delightful thoughts!

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  6. And finding answers to riddles make life so very interesting and beautiful...Beautifully expressed Rachana..

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  7. loved ur haiku alot:) especially the last line!

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  8. Love does provide us with interesting puzzles to attempt to solve!!! This is my Day 8 ~~ Waiting Their Turn.

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