Saturday, April 28, 2012

Heartbeat

this one is for you sweets!!! ~today is a fairy-tale


on your chest nestled
I slept snug settling unplanned
hearing your heartbeat

  • Haiku Heights - Day 29 : #141 : Any topic : Heartbeat



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
ubicado en el pecho
Dormí bien ajustada la solución no planificado
escuchar los latidos del corazón

In Portugese
em seu peito aninhado
Eu dormia aconchegado resolução não planejada
ouvir o seu batimento cardíaco

9 comments:

  1. So beautiful and romantic. Thank you.

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  2. lovely romantic haiku ~ nurturing ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  3. Awesome haiku, very sweet and lovely imagery. The Heartbeat of your beloved is the greatest sound to hear.

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  4. Very romantic. i love that you dedicated it.

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  5. Hearing your heartbeat..said it all!

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