Saturday, April 21, 2012

Still




silence fills space, when
your sweet lips found my still lips
between long fond blink


  • Haiku Heights - Day 22 : #134 : Still



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
silenciar a llenar el espacio, cuando
tus dulces labios encontraron los labios aún
entre un abrir y cerrar gusta mucho

In Portugese
silenciar preencher o espaço, quando
seus lábios doces encontrei meus lábios ainda
entre piscar gostava muito

3 comments:

  1. ah, so romantic ~ lovely haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  2. Very poetic and one of best love ode!

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  3. My lips certainly wouldn't be still. They'd be quivering with anticipation!

    “Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”

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