Monday, April 9, 2012

summer




light pouring through trees
my spine arching your support
sweet sweat of summer


  • Haiku Heights - Day 8 : #119 : Summer
  • Picture from movie 'Amelie'



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
luz que se vierte a través de árboles
arqueando la espalda de su apoyo
sudor dulce del verano

In Portugese
luz a verter através das árvores
minha coluna arquear seu apoio
suor doce do verão

9 comments:

  1. great lines...beautifully penned... :)

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  2. You took my breath away.. what a beautiful word picture.. well done Rachana....

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  3. beautiful... absolutely..!! :)

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  4. Very beautiful shade of summer spills out of your Haiku... :)

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  5. Very nice (and passionate) haiku. I liked it.

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  6. so true rachana :)nice haiku :)

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  7. Beautiful alliteration of "s" creates a wonderful summer atmosphere! Delightful!

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  8. Awesome haiku, love the picture going with it.

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