Saturday, September 8, 2012

Render Haiku


in the cage of chest
a rusted heart used to ache

render tender touch

20 comments:

  1. I really like the "rusty heart." Wonderful imagery in this.

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  2. sounds as though she is ready for some gentle love.....

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    1. Yes, that was the idea and thought behind!
      Love is in the air!

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  3. Awesome imagery you paint here with your words. This is such a lovely, romantic and sweet haiku.

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    1. So glad that you liked it Kristjaan!!
      Thankyou for stopping by :)

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  4. Could hear that heart's cry...
    Splendid!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/beloved-parents.html

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    1. So glad that you could relate to the Haiku :)

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  5. loved this one !!!

    By the way, u seem to be an Ek Tha Tiger fan ;-)

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  6. Hi Racha rhythm,
    That's such a cute cute Haiku :)

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    1. Hey Simjoy!! Howz life, long time,
      So happy to know that liked this haiku too :))

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  7. I think every month is February for you, eh Rach? ;)

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    1. Leo, I never thought about it,
      But may be mentally I was born in Feb.
      BTW you just wished me Birthday, few days back :D

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