if all my mistakes
was to see your smile, I doubt
if it was mistake!
was to see your smile, I doubt
if it was mistake!
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
si todos mis errores
fue a ver su sonrisa, no creo que
si fue un error!
In Portugese
se todos os meus erros
foi para ver o seu sorriso, eu duvido
se era erro!
a wonderful haiku..
ReplyDeletei donno,
i too am not sure if it can be called a mistake anymore.. unless it is from a true heart, of true love, with true intentions, it is a mistake, i feel.
loved it.. :)
I doubt!! ehhee..
DeleteThankyou so much for your thoughts, truly appreciate them!
I doubt too..
ReplyDeletehehe.. :P I doubt too
DeleteThis is a very sweet haiku. So positive.
ReplyDeleteEllecee, you are a darling absolutely... Thankyou for blessing me with your presence. Gracious Always!
DeleteVery nice twist...just a note that haiku do not end in the same rhyming words ~
ReplyDeleteCheers :-)
Grace, I shall definitely keep that in mind in future!! Thank you for bringing that into my notice. :))
Deletelovely haiku ~ great meaning ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteNamaste Carol, Thank you for the visit :))
DeleteIf I get it exactly what you want to say..then I would say don't stop making mistakes...keep blooming with one's smiles..Rachana.. amazing talent you!!
ReplyDeleteThat was cute doubt and mistake ...Let it be like that forever :)
ReplyDeleteSweet tribute to someone ~~ :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 4 ~~ Suspicion Erupts.