Friday, April 6, 2012

Hope



faint speck of your light,
Can I repay hope given?
eons of time, We meet!


  • Haiku Heights - Day 6 : #118 : Hope
  • Picture from movie 'Amelie'



  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
punto débil de tu luz,
¿Puedo pagar Esperamos dado?
eones de tiempo, nos reunimos!

In Portugese
cisco fracos de sua luz,
Posso pagar espero dado?
eons de tempo, nos encontramos!

8 comments:

  1. I am wordless...this is pure magic of creation.. Sahi Mayano Mein Rachana..wow!!

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  2. I like this haiku very much. My favorite line is "faint speck of your light" It is a lovely phrase.

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  3. lovely written haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  4. Dead good! I like that word eons!

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  5. Nicely composed haiku. It's really awesome and magical how you're painting with words. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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