Thursday, September 6, 2012

Milky way

You enlighten me
you means Hope means milky way
spurn going back to dark


  1. I like the repeated hope and means here - this haiku has a nice poetic rhythm.

  2. I love the last line. Very nice.

  3. How could anyone turn away from light and embrace darkness?

    Milky Way

  4. Interesting way of using it :)


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