Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Rain Rhyme Haiku


right before darkness
your warm breath reaches my cheek

rain rhymes whispers out!

10 comments:

  1. Lovely composition... describes nature and the rain... beautiful pic and composition

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  2. Wow, I really like the 'rain rhymes whispers out.'

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  3. Wonderfully composed haiku ... nice imagery that last line is ... awesome ...

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  4. I second Barbara :) That's exquisite image.

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  5. This is a lovely romantic haiku - I like it very much.

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  6. I agree with Barbara "rain rhymes whispers out" is lyrical

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  7. A beautiful haiku...I liked the last line..

    RS:)

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