Friday, June 8, 2012

Ordinary



outstretched palms in dark
dare dream, ordinary plans,

our arching hearts mourned


12 comments:

  1. Selection of the pictures are the first thing I notice, again, hats off!,."ordinary plans" best part here.

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  2. You always take one to a totally different world..interesting ..but then is it 'arching' or 'aching'..I stand confused...

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    1. Thank you so much!!
      It's arching* what I meant in the above haiku :)

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  3. Your haiku always seem a lot cinematic, dramatic etc ;) Very different, Rach.

    Where art thou nowadays? Do come to other blogs too, it's not fair of you that we all come enjoy your party and you don't come to ours na :P

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    1. Leo you will be surprised to know that I write Haiku first & latter try to get/sync with the appropriate picture for the post ;)
      And yeah movies* I sure love moments* real or reel :P

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  4. haiku is out of the ordinary.....word choices and photo are very interesting...

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  5. extraordinary attempt... lovely description the words are representing the pic :):):)

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  6. That picture!!! The haiku works well with it :)

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  7. you have slain me with utter beauty and longing.

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  8. Great haiku... there's a whole story you tell here with just a few words!

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  9. wonderful choice of words, and a totally different take on 'ordinary' than what i have read so far! :)

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