I could not change
long night after bright day,
Cold talks ignore way!
long night after bright day,
Cold talks ignore way!
nasty tumble tear
slip in tidal, tastes like sea,
pale cheeks, pink lips sealed!
slip in tidal, tastes like sea,
pale cheeks, pink lips sealed!
last thing that soul longs
joy stolen yet a smile shared
something to shew!
joy stolen yet a smile shared
something to shew!
looking at mirror
lonely, alone for so long,
locked in reflection!
lonely, alone for so long,
locked in reflection!
holding hands reminds
at times, you are sure missing
being real together!
at times, you are sure missing
being real together!
I'll write, you'll erase
it was not the deal of our
part of art in love!
it was not the deal of our
part of art in love!
Symbols illustrate
illuminate sincerely,
Search simple story!
illuminate sincerely,
Search simple story!
- Written for d'verse
being real together is truly important...holding hands is often symbolic of the close-ness...i see some that walk side by side but never do and i wonder at times...
ReplyDeleteOuch: I believe her loss, her salty tear, the width and depth of the loneliness around her. My favorite line: "I'll write, you'll erase."
ReplyDeleteAn interesting twist on the triversen form, wrapped around a heartfelt sentiment.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful group of haiku, Rachana. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteYou gave us Triversen with a twist and I LIKE it!
ReplyDeleteIndeed this is two poems posing as one and read apart, the meanings slightly alter. Very creative, and yes I think very modern!
Interesting take on the form Triversen :)
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