Sitting on seashore
salty sea in eyes elope
dreams floats staring stars
salty sea in eyes elope
dreams floats staring stars
- Haiku Heights - Day 8 : #119 : Seashore
- Picture from movie 'Amelie'
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
le gusta a las escondidas
mientras que el juego, el tacto y me puso en libertad
habla de amor en las adivinanzas
In Portugese
gostaria de esconde-esconde
enquanto toque jogo, e me libertar
fala de amor em enigmas
Could be the other way round..stars may be staring at dreams which could be glittering more.. I enjoyed this haiku..make it 'float'..
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully expressed capturing what most people feel sitting by the seashore! :)
ReplyDeletevery deep and intense..."salty seas in eyes elope"...loved this line... :)
ReplyDelete'dreams float' ~ lovely visuals ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteLovely image you have painted here with your words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful floating, whimsical feeling in these words!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery created for your seashore prompt ... This is my Day 9 ~~ Stretches of Seashore.
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