Saturday, September 8, 2012

Render Haiku


in the cage of chest
a rusted heart used to ache
render tender touch

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20 comments:

  1. PattiKenSeptember 7, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    I really like the "rusty heart." Wonderful imagery in this.

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  2. BarbaraSeptember 7, 2012 at 3:49 PM

    Very romantic!

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  3. joanneSeptember 7, 2012 at 4:45 PM

    sounds as though she is ready for some gentle love.....

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    1. Rachana ShakyawarSeptember 9, 2012 at 9:48 AM

      Yes, that was the idea and thought behind!
      Love is in the air!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    like like LIKE

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  5. Reading PleasureSeptember 7, 2012 at 6:30 PM

    lovely

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 7, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    Awesome imagery you paint here with your words. This is such a lovely, romantic and sweet haiku.

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    1. Rachana ShakyawarSeptember 9, 2012 at 9:52 AM

      So glad that you liked it Kristjaan!!
      Thankyou for stopping by :)

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  7. LocomenteSeptember 8, 2012 at 3:30 AM

    Could hear that heart's cry...
    Splendid!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/beloved-parents.html

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  8. Amrit SinhaSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:53 AM

    loved this one !!!

    By the way, u seem to be an Ek Tha Tiger fan ;-)

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  9. SimranSeptember 8, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    Hi Racha rhythm,
    That's such a cute cute Haiku :)

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    1. Rachana ShakyawarSeptember 9, 2012 at 9:56 AM

      Hey Simjoy!! Howz life, long time,
      So happy to know that liked this haiku too :))

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  10. Vinay Leo R.September 8, 2012 at 8:41 PM

    I think every month is February for you, eh Rach? ;)

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    1. Rachana ShakyawarSeptember 9, 2012 at 9:57 AM

      Leo, I never thought about it,
      But may be mentally I was born in Feb.
      BTW you just wished me Birthday, few days back :D

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