you like hide and seek
while play, touch and set me free
love talks in riddles
while play, touch and set me free
love talks in riddles
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
le gusta a las escondidas
mientras que el juego, el tacto y me puso en libertad
habla de amor en las adivinanzas
In Portugese
gostaria de esconde-esconde
enquanto toque jogo, e me libertar
fala de amor em enigmas
"love talks in riddles" nice sentence. What a wonderful verse. I have used hide and seek also in my contribution for the April Challenge of Haiku heights.
ReplyDeleteCome and see for yourself.
I write under the nom the plume Chevrefeuille which is French for Honeysuckle. I am writing haiku sine the late eighties.
Loved your take on the words in the Haiku!!
DeleteSure look forward to know more about the take behind the name you have chosen, I love Honeysuckle flowers :)
Thank you for sharing your ideas and story with us!
I truly appreciate that!
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Ah, yes ~ love can talk in riddles ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteNameste Carol!! Glad you liked it!! :)
Deletelove talks in riddle.. that's a beautiful line..true..
ReplyDeletenice haiku... :)
This is very nice. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe riddles of love can be like a serious game. Delightful thoughts!
ReplyDeleteAnd finding answers to riddles make life so very interesting and beautiful...Beautifully expressed Rachana..
ReplyDeleteNicely crafted. I like this a lot!
ReplyDeleteloved ur haiku alot:) especially the last line!
ReplyDeleteLove does provide us with interesting puzzles to attempt to solve!!! This is my Day 8 ~~ Waiting Their Turn.
ReplyDeleteLove IS a riddle, and I have yet to unravel it!
ReplyDeleteThe Christ Child at Play