on my hand, brings back
temptation, heat up old flames!
slightest brush of yours
- Haiku Heights - Day 28 : #139 : Temptation
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
Yo canto en la gracia suave
melodía en mí el tuyo
la música dentro de nosotros,
In Portugese
menor escova do seu
na minha mão, traz de volta
tentação, aquecer chamas antigos!,
Romantically expressed the first encounters with a partner! Beautiful...
ReplyDeleteRosy lips of temptation - A Haiku
Hi Rachana,
ReplyDeleteI like the image as well as your poem.Since I read the line on your comment "constructive feedback",I would like to correct your Haiku to be 5-7-5 format.(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku)
Nice...:-) could totally relate to it...:-) some temptations never die!...
ReplyDeleteBeing a romantic person, I love this haiku. Thank you.
ReplyDeletelovely romantic haiku and great photo ~ feel the love ~ ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery romantic haiku. Nice.
ReplyDeletePicture and haiku, such a nice painting out here!
ReplyDeleteThis is pretty well crafted haiku..passionate.. well done..
ReplyDeleteromantic one Creator..
ReplyDeleteBrush, brush, brush...
ReplyDeleteSniffing Temptation