silence fills space, when
your sweet lips found my still lips
between long fond blink
your sweet lips found my still lips
between long fond blink
- Haiku Heights - Day 22 : #134 : Still
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
silenciar a llenar el espacio, cuando
tus dulces labios encontraron los labios aún
entre un abrir y cerrar gusta mucho
In Portugese
silenciar preencher o espaço, quando
seus lábios doces encontrei meus lábios ainda
entre piscar gostava muito
ah, so romantic ~ lovely haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery poetic and one of best love ode!
ReplyDeleteMy lips certainly wouldn't be still. They'd be quivering with anticipation!
ReplyDelete“Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”