light pouring through trees
my spine arching your support
sweet sweat of summer
my spine arching your support
sweet sweat of summer
- I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.
In Spanish
luz que se vierte a través de árboles
arqueando la espalda de su apoyo
sudor dulce del verano
In Portugese
luz a verter através das árvores
minha coluna arquear seu apoio
suor doce do verão
great lines...beautifully penned... :)
ReplyDeleteYou took my breath away.. what a beautiful word picture.. well done Rachana....
ReplyDeletebeautiful... absolutely..!! :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful shade of summer spills out of your Haiku... :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice (and passionate) haiku. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteso true rachana :)nice haiku :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful alliteration of "s" creates a wonderful summer atmosphere! Delightful!
ReplyDeleteAwesome haiku, love the picture going with it.
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