Wednesday, April 11, 2012

coherent



wish closing my eyes
I could crawl into cocoon
coherent wrapt you

  • Haiku Heights - Day 8 : #119 : Coherent


  • I got couple of Sweet friends who speak Spanish and Portuguese, so I thought to translate the lines and writing them too so that it would be easy for them to go through.

In Spanish
quiere cerrar los ojos
Podría meterme en capullo
envuelto coherente que

In Portugese
gostaria de fechar meus olhos
Eu poderia rastejar no casulo
wrapt coerente você


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5 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodApril 11, 2012 at 12:05 PM

    I felt so good to read something so intense..very thoughtful creations day after day..Thank You Rachana..

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  2. CYNOSUREApril 11, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    awesome... :)

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  3. PattiKenApril 11, 2012 at 1:26 PM

    I love the first two lines of this. Made me wish I could too.

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  4. Sri ValliApril 12, 2012 at 6:42 AM

    This is amazing!...Nice creativity!

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  5. ChevrefeuilleApril 12, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    Fantastic haiku ... it builds up with every sentence and than ... it becomes a clear verse.

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