Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Paperboat Haiku


push a little joy,
puddle of the rain-water
paperboat afloat!


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11 comments:

  1. ElleceeSeptember 25, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    "push a little joy" I really like that phrase. A special haiku today.

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  2. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:20 PM

    "Push a little joy" - great line!

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  3. Sri ValliSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:42 PM

    paperboat afloat....Love the rhyming over here....Sweet haiku!

    Life of paper boat

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  4. Ramesh SoodSeptember 25, 2012 at 9:56 PM

    Beautiful paper-boat that!!

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  5. odyzzSeptember 25, 2012 at 11:32 PM

    sweet childhood memories.. :)nicely done

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  6. Amrit SinhaSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:33 AM

    Very beautifully written. I loved the 1st line :-)

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  7. jmbhattSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    "push a little joy..." Fabulous first line!!!

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  8. jmbhattSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    "Push a little joy...." fabulous first line!!!!

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  9. DulcinaSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:55 AM

    So optimistic and encouraging.
    I love the progression in meaning and in the letter size, well done!
    The image is very nice too.
    :)

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  10. Reading PleasureSeptember 26, 2012 at 6:50 AM

    Beautiful take on the prompt

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 26, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    There is joyfulness here!


    Paper Boat

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