true sentiments touch,
not testing your patience,
just try, read my eyes!
not testing your patience,
just try, read my eyes!
- September Heights : Revelation
- Symphony
Friday, September 14, 2012
8 comments:
You have known me with my first blog Humming Today
Now this is a time for me to know more of YOU.
Since, I know no matter how much your and my life be counted as different, we still share same feelings, emotions, needs, desires and dreams!
Lets share more of rhyme & hymns of Life!
Please be free to share your ideas, questions or anything you like or even dislike about this blog/post.
I will heartily appreciate you constructive feedback!
Lets lead Life a melodic style!
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Teri Ankhon ke sivay is duniya me rakkha kya hai?
ReplyDeleteInterest words and image. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Ia there a revelation in those eyes? Will he/she be able to see it? Well done.
ReplyDeleteThere's a clash coming. Your haiku fells like a challenge being issued. You caught the conflict.
ReplyDeleteRead my eyes ... romantic :-)
ReplyDeleteread my eyes! what a line - so original and well-written
ReplyDeleteI see the conflict too.. esp if it's going to be read incorrectly.
ReplyDeleteEyes reveal much!
ReplyDeleteRevelation