outstretched palms in dark
dare dream, ordinary plans,
our arching hearts mourned
dare dream, ordinary plans,
our arching hearts mourned
- Written for Haiku Heights : #148 : Ordinary
- Written for Haiku my Heart!
Friday, June 8, 2012
12 comments:
You have known me with my first blog Humming Today
Now this is a time for me to know more of YOU.
Since, I know no matter how much your and my life be counted as different, we still share same feelings, emotions, needs, desires and dreams!
Lets share more of rhyme & hymns of Life!
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Selection of the pictures are the first thing I notice, again, hats off!,."ordinary plans" best part here.
ReplyDeleteThe picture and words go very well!!!
ReplyDeletePainting heart with hope
You always take one to a totally different world..interesting ..but then is it 'arching' or 'aching'..I stand confused...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!
DeleteIt's arching* what I meant in the above haiku :)
Your haiku always seem a lot cinematic, dramatic etc ;) Very different, Rach.
ReplyDeleteWhere art thou nowadays? Do come to other blogs too, it's not fair of you that we all come enjoy your party and you don't come to ours na :P
Leo you will be surprised to know that I write Haiku first & latter try to get/sync with the appropriate picture for the post ;)
DeleteAnd yeah movies* I sure love moments* real or reel :P
haiku is out of the ordinary.....word choices and photo are very interesting...
ReplyDeleteextraordinary attempt... lovely description the words are representing the pic :):):)
ReplyDeleteThat picture!!! The haiku works well with it :)
ReplyDeleteyou have slain me with utter beauty and longing.
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku... there's a whole story you tell here with just a few words!
ReplyDeletewonderful choice of words, and a totally different take on 'ordinary' than what i have read so far! :)
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