You enlighten me
you means Hope means milky way
spurn going back to dark
you means Hope means milky way
spurn going back to dark
- September Heights : Milky Way
Thursday, September 6, 2012
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You have known me with my first blog Humming Today
Now this is a time for me to know more of YOU.
Since, I know no matter how much your and my life be counted as different, we still share same feelings, emotions, needs, desires and dreams!
Lets share more of rhyme & hymns of Life!
Please be free to share your ideas, questions or anything you like or even dislike about this blog/post.
I will heartily appreciate you constructive feedback!
Lets lead Life a melodic style!
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I like the repeated hope and means here - this haiku has a nice poetic rhythm.
ReplyDeleteAgree! Spurn it I will!
ReplyDeleteI love the last line. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku ... well done
ReplyDeleteAha ... this was different :-)
ReplyDeleteA sweet delicate haiku of hope!
ReplyDeleteHow could anyone turn away from light and embrace darkness?
ReplyDeleteMilky Way
Interesting way of using it :)
ReplyDeleteUnique take Creator!
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